Mar 7, 2012

The Angel And The Flower


Far away on a cloud of dreams
Sits a young angel crying.
A tear from his eyes or so it seems
Falls onto a flower that’s dying,
The tear so pure so gentle so sweet
Like balm to the flower it falls
And in a jiffy their eyes meet
Their eyes and then their souls.
Just then the angel ceases his tears
And the flower revives and grins,
They both forget all their fears
And the world all over again, spins.

7 comments:

  1. Aren't you glad the flower was revived? Don't you hope for one gigantic angle to drop a tear on the world's misery to bring back its lost paradise?

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  2. Hopefully one day all of our fears will be forgotten too and we'll live peacefully

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  3. Hopefully, everyone's fears are forgotten and that this angel touches everyone's heart with his balm so that no one knows the meaning of sadness. thank you for your comments

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  4. Effective words, if people in this world are just like the flower and the angel then we shall be living in peace, hope one day people recognise that no life without unity and linked hearts..

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  5. This is really a nice choice... Tender words with some hope will bring us back to life again forgetting all the stress that kills us ...Really it is a nice piece...

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  6. you are right. words can have contradictory effects on a human, they can be constructive and they can be destructive, they can soothe your pain and they can bring you torture and suffering. this is especially true if words are combined with deeds and are truthful.
    hopefully, everyone finds the secret of the therapeutic and constructive effect of words and use them for this purpose.

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  7. Nice words I hope to live in a peace if people just like the flower and the angel.

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